The Power of Poetry
A zoom-friend who lives on the west coast writes poetry and
promised to read a sonnet at our next online gathering.
Do I really know what
a sonnet is? I asked myself (quietly, not aloud, reluctant to display my
ignorance). I might have known at one time, when studying Shakespeare in school
(‘Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day’). But what did I really know of the
rules and composition of a sonnet?
Google stepped in and informed me of sonnet rules:
ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.
Why not try writing one myself? I tried painting during the pandemic, never
mind that I didn’t know acrylics from watercolours, a flat brush from a fan
brush. Why not a sonnet?
I’d also recently heard on an online conference summit that
poetry and laughter are two things guaranteed to engage the right brain. Not
much laughing going on in the world right now. So, poetry then. In her blog
Transactions With Beauty, Shawna LeMay has some links to beautiful poetry
(here).
So, on an evening this week, while dinner simmered, I tried
my hand at writing a sonnet (results below).
I realized I knew little about poetry. By little, I mean nothing. But I want to learn to appreciate poetry, the beauty of the rhythm and cadence of the words, the meanings within.
Off I went to my local library to
find some books on poetry. And, as sometimes happens, the first book I came
across was this one: “Poetry Will Save Your Life”, a memoir by Jill Bialosky.
Memoir (one of my favourite genres) and poetry rolled into one.
Bialosky writes: “Poems are composed of our own language
disordered, reconfigured, reimagined, and compressed in ways that offer a
heightened sense of reality and embrace a common humanity.” She goes on to say, “Poems are a form of mythmaking,
as they seek to create a unified vision of cosmic, social, and primal life
order. Because of their compact and compressed form, they are immediate and
intimate.”
In each chapter of her book she relates a personal story and
meets that experience with poems that resonated, poems that range from
Dickenson to Wordsworth. Remember “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud’? Who doesn’t
love those words, those images of ‘a host, of golden daffodils’. Lines of poems
that I loved and repeated as a child and teenager came back to me. Maybe I did
love poetry once. Maybe it’s time to discover
and love it again.
Okay, so if you’ve read this far into the post, you’ve stuck
around for my feeble attempt at a sonnet, which I reveal here with a great deal
of cringing. (Keep in mind that my day job is in IT, mostly logical, analytical
thinking, so creative brain function may be weak or non-existent):
Time Is Fleeing
Time is
fleeing, the wind keeps whispering
Unearth your
dreams from where they lay buried
What is the
song the morning bird doth sing?
“Dig deep, dig
deep, until you find that seed.”
Remember when
Knowing ushered you in?
But in between
you stumbled and you fell
It was not all
about the climb, the win
Shards of
heart, broken parts, glimpses of hell.
In youth,
wanting the river while at sea
Climbing a
mountain, not seeing blue sky
Which is the
way to the soul being free?
In birth we
know, or was that all a lie?
Time is
passing, look back, within, ahead
Those dreams
you once had, they are not yet dead.
Pearl
Richard
OH Pearl, what a gift in the synchronicity of these posts today!! I delight in reading your current journey of discovery and grappling with poetry and I resonate with all of it. I could have written this exact line ... "I realized I knew little about poetry. By little, I mean nothing. But I want to learn to appreciate poetry, the beauty of the rhythm and cadence of the words, the meanings within. " Thank you for sharing your poem here, what a gift ... my favorite line among so many ... "Remember when Knowing ushered you in?"
ReplyDeleteThe poem is wonderful!! Is there anything you can't do??
ReplyDeleteYou're too kind. There's a LOT I can't do (Cooking great food comes to mind). But I'm willing to try.
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